When me and my group were still editing our thriller opening sequence, we asked one of our peer's from another group to assess our work and give us positive critism, on what we could improve on and what we had done well so far.
Ryan Clark said:
I think that Brittany, Jamal and Becca have worked really hard planning and preparing for their opening sequence. The quality of their shots are of a very high standard, and they have a variety of shots, with focus pull being their most successful. I think that their idea for their opening sequence was very creative, and they used their props and the setting of their location really well.
However, even though they are still editing I think that they need to ensure that their shots are not so choppy, and that they blend in and run smoothly. Also I think that they need to cut some shorts, as even though their well framed shots they need to pick up a bit of speed to add tension and create an atnmosphere. The music still needs to be included, however they have been creative with their titles, connoting with the theme of their opening sequence.
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